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lalo; scene two; 6 pages
The second completed scene in Lalo. Things begin to get a little bit weird. Believe it gets a lot weirder before the story is through. The scene after this one, for example, is really, really weird.
( So I think when I counted there were 15 cut to-s in this scene. /o\ But, it makes sense in context I swear! Also this is basically all action. Like four short things get said, and it is over 5 pages long. But it makes sense in context too? Wow, I am not selling this at all. )
( So I think when I counted there were 15 cut to-s in this scene. /o\ But, it makes sense in context I swear! Also this is basically all action. Like four short things get said, and it is over 5 pages long. But it makes sense in context too? Wow, I am not selling this at all. )