Lalo sounds way cool. When school isn't kicking my ass I'll try to give you better feedback than that. I know how annoying vague writerly compliments can be. (How many times have you heard, "Oh, that's good!" in lieu of something constructive?)

I agree! Scripts, especially, need more love on DW and LJ. I think I'm part of the minority that actually prefers them to novels, but that's just because I enjoy character development and dialogue waaaay too much, haha. I'm also quite lazy. :P Let me know if you ever need crit for that kind of stuff. I'd be happy to give it.