So. This Script Frenzy has become a prime example of me not taking myself, my writing, my characters, or my plot very seriously. Which I guess is fair seeing as it's a mad dash to 100 pages. And also I've been distracted by something really fucking stupid:

(This is not Lalo. This is not anything like Lalo. I will post something later to prove just how much this is not like Lalo.)

( EXT. PLEASANT CITY, STREET CORNER - DAY )